User:Yeulefan4l/Thomas Grubb/BerrySun Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yeulefan4l, Red9qg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yeulefan4l/Thomas Grubb


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Thomas Grubb

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Red9qg 's Additions


 * The user does not have a page for their contributions to this the article.
 * The user's additions are not in the reviewed draft either.
 * Can only see the user's additions made in the mainspace looking at the article's history.


 * The user added a good source for when Thomas Grubb's death was.
 * Source 6 is a good source for the addition.
 * Good job updating the date and the location of his death.

Yeulefan4l's Additions


 * Easy to see the user's additions the the article.
 * The last four sentences should cite sources with them for reliability.
 * The last sentence could be taken as an opinion.
 * The additions to the article are relevent and good additions.
 * The link for source 2 and source 5 doesn't take you to the website where the source is.
 * Might want to remove the links for those two sources.
 * Source 6 is a good source, but work needs to be done on source 2 and source 5.
 * Links to the Wikipedia articles in the first section of your additions are good.
 * Links to the Wikipedia articles go to their respective articles, good job.