User:Yguzman10/Evaluate an Article

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I never knew anyone wrote about this. I had heard of women of color being discriminated against or not believed by their health care providers but i did not know there was a name for it. I think it is important to talk about such issues that do affect women. (Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

Evaluate the article
Lead Section

-last sentence ends abruptly. There needs to be a better flow from this section into the next.

-good intro to this issue.

Content

-i think there could be a section on how physical abuse could affect the health of the baby.

-perhaps a section on the history of this form of abuse. how far back does it go.

Tone and balance

-i think the tone is neutral in this article.

-the balance is off though as i think there is more to be said about this issue that could give it more balance.

-has anyone ever done an interview or seen the point of view of the health care professionals who work at these hospitals.

Sources and References

-one source seems to be a primary source.

-some articles are at least more than 5 years old

-i think there is more info in the articles that could have been used in this article to give a better idea of what women face during childbirth.

Organization and Writing Quality

-the writing is repetitive at times

-organization is not bad but again more information would tie everything together better.

Images and Media

-no images provided, probably may be to much for some viewers.

Talk page Discussion

-interesting, it seems like this article was created as an assignment at the beginning of 2021. perhaps it was a class like ours.

Overall Impression

-overall i think this article taught me something which i think is an important take. However, there is more to be said and there is definitely room for improvement.

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