User:Yhchoi24/Oyster bar/Mayarnott Peer Review

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Oyster Bar


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 * Oyster bar


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Article jumps from 1892 to 2000s and the years in between are a mystery.

Only focuses on European contribution.

Mentions about the French name of oyster bar in the lead but does not elaborate much in the rest of the article.

African Americans shaped the economy of Chesapeake Bay but it is not mentioned.

The tone is neutral and talks about facts, but lacks other information, especially the contributions of Black people.