User:Yiayi/Al-Aziz mosque, Abu Dhabi/Basel El Husseini Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Al-Aziz mosque, Abu Dhabi
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article provides a comprehensive overview of the Mosque of Al-Aziz, detailing its history, architecture, and significance. However, there are certain aspects of the article that could be improved. Firstly, the assertion that the mosque's exterior "fits with the modernistic buildings surrounding it" is subjective and not necessarily factual. Such opinions should be avoided in an encyclopedia entry. Similarly, the statement regarding the separation of women during prayer as a means to avoid distractions is an opinion and not a universally accepted fact within Islamic practice.

Lastly, the article would benefit greatly from the inclusion of an image showcasing the mosque glowing at night, providing readers with a visual representation of its unique aesthetic appeal. Overall, while the article effectively presents the mosque's history and architecture, addressing these points would enhance its factual accuracy and completeness.