User:Yibeiiiii/St. Petersburg paradox/5740 Grant L Peer Review

The Lead Section can definitely be longer and should explain the paradox better. The first sentence should describe what the actual paradox is because saying that it is related to probability doesn't help someone understand the paradox. I think there just needs to be a better explanation overall of the paradox. I think it is important to also describe the importance of the paradox and how it relates to peoples' lives.

The content of the article seems to be very limited. I am not too familiar with the paradox but I feel like a lot more on the mathematics can be provided. You could add stuff on the Bernoulli distribution and then provide some examples. Also, there should be more figures. You could probably find them from the references listed, as there are a lot of sources already. I think overall, a new section should be added on the technical derivation of the paradox and then the other sections just further elaborated on.