User:Yibeiiiii/St. Petersburg paradox/EyeOfTheUniverse Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yibeiiiii:

User:Yibeiiiii/St. Petersburg paradox/Bibliography


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yibeiiiii/St. Petersburg paradox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * St. Petersburg paradox

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are quite a few improvements that can be made. The expected utility theory section can have more resources added for sure. Especially for the first half of that section. The recent discussions section seems under developed. The headers should be more descriptive, the sub-heading of recent discussions seems overly vague, its not clear before reading what this section is about. Furthermore, even after reading, it seems like more information could definitely be put, so that would be a nice place to do a large edit. A history section could be useful, especially since a lot of history is already included but its not organized into one section.

A lot of the resources can be cited more consistently ([x] style) to add cohesiveness to the article.

The Finite St. Petersburg lotteries part has examples that feel incohesive. Millionaire, billionaire, are both general, then Bezos is a person before going into GDP of just once country then the world, then unimaginably large numbers. It is a very strange list. Editing that list to be more cohesive would be a great change as well.