User:Yibrahim/sandbox

Strenghts and Weaknesses of my assigned article
Strengths of the article Solar eclipse:

-Organized format of the article and a table of contents that lets users click to wherever they want to read

-Links to reliable references that work correctly

-The status of the article as a featured article

Weaknesses of the article Solar eclipse:

-Very in depth so it may take a while to read through the whole thing

-Some parts of the article have words and explanations that might be hard for a person with little knowledge of astronomy and eclipses to understand

Edits I have made to my assigned article
"The next solar eclipse will occur on February 15, 2018. It will be a partial solar eclipse visible from Antarctica and south South America."

-I added this in under the recent and forthcoming solar eclipses section to highlight when the next solar eclipse would be occurring outside of the chart that it is listed in to make it easier for readers interested in the viewing the next eclipse to find this bit of information.

"This narrow track is called the path of totality."

-I added this in under the types of eclipses section under the total eclipse subsection as a clarification to anybody who may not know enough about astronomy and solar eclipses to know what the path of totality is.