User:Yidanlong/LoveMustNotBeForgotten/Adambletcher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yidanlong


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 * User:Yidanlong/LoveMustNotBeForgotten
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Organization

-Your article is very well organized and very easy to navigate. Your use of sub-headings is highly effective

-Minor formatting errors

Media

-You should add some images to your article. Such as a photo of the author or the cover of the novel

Lead

-Lead is pretty bare and could give a brief overview of the plot or background information on the author

Tone and Balance

-The tone is very balanced, giving a clear overview of the movie

Sources

-Your article could include just a couple more sources

Content

-I found your content very easy to read