User:Yidanlong/LoveMustNotBeForgotten/Ic C0101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Group of Yidan Long


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yidanlong/LoveMustNotBeForgotten?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
First impression is that the article draft has a fairly clear structure with each section corresponded to the different aspects. The aspects are all relevant, as they indicate the components of the story. The article seems to have a neutral voice, but maybe consider some visual support and possibly more sources.