User:Yidanlong/Operation Red Sea/Cchu13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yidanlong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yidanlong/Operation_Red_Sea?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Currently there are three sections in the lead portion of the draft. They are all fairly simple yet straight forward summaries of the points that are trying to push through. However, it seems that there is more room to elaborate on the sections, particularly the summary of the plot. The background information provided about the historical context was very interesting and added needed context to the article. Additionally, since the section of "characters" is new, I think it would be beneficial to provide a bit more information on each character if possible.