User:Yiding wang/Big Shot's Funeral/KylinZX Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yiding wang/Big Shot's Funeral


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Big Shot's Funeral


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Big Shot's Funeral

Evaluate the drafted changes
The leading part of the article is relatively simple, only stating the director of the movie. Lack of countries, release dates and other key information. The article is clear and includes most of the elements of a movie. In the cast section, perhaps appropriate pictures and character explanations will help the reader understand the relevant information. The plot of the movie is outlined in great detail. The whole article lacks a section about the film's box office and reviews. This may result in readers being unable to access relevant information. In general, this article is missing a lot of important information needed to introduce a movie. But the plot was great. Maybe adding some pictures will make the reader more interested.