User:Yiding wang/Big Shot's Funeral/Scott B2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yiding wang/Big Shot's Funeral


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yiding%20wang/Big_Shot%27s_Funeral?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Big Shot's Funeral

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft appears to have all the major topics covered for the film. It displays the core summary of the plot and the development of the film. There are some typos that are in the body of the draft, but that should be easily remedied before the final review is published. I am unsure if the "comment" section at the end is opinion and whether or not it should be re-examined. Overall, I believe that they main body is set up, and that all that needs to be done is citations as well as links.