User:Yifanbao1/Media democracy/Ningjiang216 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * yifanbao1
 * Media democracy

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Content added is relevant and up-to-date
 * Very thorough review on the definition, as well as the different tones
 * Can remove some excess bullet points in the headers

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Tone is mostly neutral; can be a little less narrative (ie: "Further to this point,)
 * Does a good job of remaining neutreal and explaining stances (feminism)

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * good citations for those that are finished; can add more under criticism
 * sources are thorough and current and reflect available literature

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * grammar can be fixed in certain areas
 * well-organized and comprehensive

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Article is more complete and thorough