User:Yifancai/Gender inequality in China/Aslowstory Peer Review

General info
Yifancai
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Yifancai/Gender inequality in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gender inequality in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft is starting to look really good! I like the article you chose, as well as what sections you've chosen to edit. I would say the main thing is to remember to add citations to articles at specific parts of the post rather than have links that connect to other wiki articles. All the information looks good, relevant, and informed. I'm excited to check back in on the rest of your draft soon!