User:Yifu6/California housing shortage/Abbyroman Peer Review

General info
Yifu6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yifu6/California_housing_shortage?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * California housing shortage

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition of the section surrounding SB4, SB 423 and SB 555 feels neutral and clear. Additionally the subsections also enhance the organizational effect of the article. It does not appear to be biased but it clearly states the flaws concerning the legislation about housing. The content is backed up by reliable sources which are timely. Moreover the edits demonstrate a changing of legislation over time. The incorporation of the this information enriches the content of the article as the reader is shown how policy effects housing over time.