User:Yifu6/California housing shortage/Aminah2640 Peer Review

General info
Yifu6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yifu6/California housing shortage
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Public housing

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added information in the article is neutral, clear, and informative while relating to the main idea of the article: California Housing Shortage. What I found really helpful was looking at how you formated your revisions in your sandbox including how you embedded your references and how you added a 2023 legislative section.

Including information on the expected impact of these bills could enhance the article. For instance, what are the projected outcomes in terms of housing availability and affordability.