User:Yingyishu/Rural poverty/Ryan Gromoll Peer Review

Hi Yingyishu,

Looking at the first image you chose I do agree that it does correlate with the paragraph above it. The image is formatted oddly though as it is very wide and skinny... this may not be your fault but I am just noting what I am observing. The caption for the image is quite vague but captions don't need to get very specific, although I may add that this article is based on the living conditions in Africa and the mud houses you inserted are actually located in India, I went to the flickr posting on this image and it states the picture was taken in bhirandiyara kutch which is a little village in Gujarat India... so I am going to say you'll need another image as well as another caption to go along with it, hope this helps and thanks for reading!

Looking at the second image I do not believe the image correlates with the sections of the article you have inserted along with it. The portions of the article are talking about health care and education and nothing to do with people getting water out of a hole. I can see very slight correlation with the way it sort of relates to the section talking about rural Africa but just very slightly, I recommend selecting a new image that pertains to the article... thanks for reading and good luck!!

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