User:Yiwang13/Data Diplomacy/Kaitlinabeele Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yiwang13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yiwang13/Data_Diplomacy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is a bit clunky and hard to follow. I would suggest trimming it down a bit and cleaning up the structure. For example:

"Data diplomacy is a new interdisciplinary field and a recent phenomenon and trend in diplomacy today. Data diplomacy can take two different forms; through the use of data as a tool in furthering national diplomacy or by the diplomatic actions that facilitate access to data."

Then I would go into more detail below. But having just a few concise, easy to read sentences at the beginning I think will make it easier to distill the crux of the article.

In your classification and application areas section, you seem to be missing some citations. I know that you've included one at the top, but is all the information in the sections below from that same source? I think you should still add citations within the rest of the section so that it is clear.

The overall structure of the headings and subheadings works well. It flows well and addresses the benefits and limitations within the field.

As I mentioned, the opening paragraphs are a bit clunky, and pose some grammatical issues. But the rest of the article seems to be fairly clean. With some light restructuring to the into, I think you will be in good shape.

The final steps would be to find some relevant graphics to include in your article. I don't know if you've given any thought to imagery, as there is nothing included at this time.

The article also abides by Wikipedia's Notability requirements, by including 4 sources. However, it could be further strengthened by including one or two more relevant citations.

Overall, I think your article is in good shape. Well done!