User:Yiwen122/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Li Jiaqi (beauty influencer)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Li Jiaqi is a famous live-streamer in China, he is a leader of China e-commerce, and also the top live-steamer. He has sold 10 billion yuan in one night at 'double-eleven day'. Li is also named as one of the 'Next 100 influential people' by Time Magazine. I chose Li jiaqi as my Wiki-project article because I felt like e-commerce is the main-stream in nowadays China, people like to shopping online instead of shopping in store, and Li is a leader in e-commerce industry. Li is quite famous in China, and also a hot topic through internet. However, I found very less information about him through Wiki-page, I would like fill some relevant information about him, and make more people get to know him.

Evaluate the article
The Wiki article about Li is quite new, the article's view point is neutral, it did not include any personal opinions.

The wiki-article is about living people's biography. The current source are based from sourced articles, and news, they are not from literature. Overall, the article is clearly stated and pretty clear, I did not see any grammatical errors. It generally talked about Li's career and early life. There are no any images on Wiki-page, and only few conversations on talk board, the comments for the articles are including: Li's achievements, and the evaluate of the article.

The article is been categorized as Wiki project biography article, and the article is not rated. The strengths of the article is the hook is quite interesting. The article can be improve by various field, for example, his achievements, expand more about his early life, and he has attended many events recent years, so maybe added these on to the page, also the images of Li can be add on.