User:Yixin97/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: Shanghai Disneyland Park
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.

I am a fan of Disney and I want to visit Shanghai Disneyland after I go back to China, so I need some information about it.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

Yes.


 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?

No.


 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?

No.


 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

It is concise.

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?

Yes.


 * Is the content up-to-date?

No. For the attendance part, the 2019 data does not update.


 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

No.

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral?

Yes.


 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

No.


 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

No.


 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

No.

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

Not all facts are from reliable secondary sources.


 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?

Yes.


 * Are the sources current?

Yes.


 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Yes.

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

Yes.


 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?

Yes, a little bit.


 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

No.

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

Yes.


 * Are images well-captioned?

Yes.


 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?

Yes.


 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Yes.

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?

No conversations.


 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?

Star-class, Low-importance. Yes, WikiProject China and WikiProject Disney.


 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?

Wikipedia discusses externals links instead of the content.

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status?

Readers can have a understand of Shanghai Disneyland, but the article needs more pictures and updated data.


 * What are the article's strengths?

Concise and clear content.


 * How can the article be improved?

Insert more attractive images and add more contents.


 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?

Underdeveloped.

Optional activity

 * Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback

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 * Link to feedback: Talk:Shanghai Disneyland Park