User:Yiyao Sun (Sophia)/Art/Linlin Jiang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yiyao Sun (Sophia)

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yiyao%20Sun%20(Sophia)/Art?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Art

Evaluate the drafted changes
Missing leads reflecting article additions.

The added content is about art for psychological and therapeutic purposes, which is part of the purpose section of the content of this Wikipedia article on art. So the added content is closely related to the entire Wikipedia article. The added content is the content that did not appear in the original article and is the latest. Nor does it address topics related to historically underrepresented groups or subjects.

The content added is neutral and has no subjective color, just stating the facts, and the concepts involved are filled in with links for readers to understand.

The reference to the added content is from Oxford Academic and is professional. is a reliable source. The sources cited are also relevant to the additions, all about the healing properties of music.