User:Yiyao Sun (Sophia)/Art/Minzhe Qi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Missing lead section. Content is relevant to the topic and tells of the role of art in healing. The content are neutral and unbiased. The content of the article uses some examples to support ideas. However, the content could be expanded a little more. The content is supported by reliable sources, but the sources are out of date and could be replaced with more recent and reliable sources. In conclusion, I think the content could be more detailed and use more valid sources.