User:Yiyao Sun (Sophia)/China during World War I/Zzhao123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Yiyao Sun(Sophia)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * China during World War I


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this is an article that can help us understand the history of China during the war very well. The introduction of this article simply and clearly introduces us to the background of China during World War I. The content of the article highlights the topic through different historical events. Secondly, the references used in this article are accurate and authentic. In addition, the organization of the essay is well organized and does not confuse the reader. Overall, the author has added content that allows the reader to better understand the contribution of China during World War I.