User:Yjldc/Child care in Canada/Annawiat32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am working on Yjldc's article on Childcare in Canada.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yjldc/Child_care_in_Canada?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child care in Canada

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, Your edits to the article "Childcare in Canada" is upstanding. I think you added in necessary, detailed information that completely improved the articles quality and structure. The subtopic of the budget for 2022 was a smart addition that you throughly attached since the original article included the Budget for 2021. The reference to how Covid changed the standards to the budget for childcare was a sizable addition that really made your edit eminent. I think that you could've possibly added in another subtopic such as childcare in a different part of Canada since it already includes childcare in Quebec just to create a different way of adding relevant information. This addition is not required just could give you something else to add. Also, in the additional information that you added to Budget 2021 when you stated, "The federal government and 13 provinces and territories will negotiate individual bilateral agreements" you could just add a small edit and name all the 13 providences just to include all information in the article instead of the reader having to look up which providences are involved. But ultimately you did a great job adding to this article and the suggestions I listed are just small things you can do to take your already good edits a little farther.