User:Yk0302/User:Kosenrufu2030/sandbox/Yk0302 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Kosenrufu2030


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kosenrufu2030/sandboxLinks to an external site.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Nice work! He created new article with good length, reliable references, and neural tone. I like how he clearly constructed the article with time period and specified Gordon Hawkins' roles in each opera. I just have some minor feedbacks.Concerning the sub heading in the article body, it would say "teaching career" instead of "teaching." Also I wish the renown opera venues, competitions and music works would link to Wikipedia so that people know how important his achievements are in Opera field. Overall, you did amazing work with finding all the sources with details.