User:Yk0302/User:Tofu98/Spanky Alford/Kosenrufu2030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tofu98/Spanky Alford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tofu98/Spanky Alford


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chalmers Alford

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article presents some updated information including artists that the subject has played for and collaborated with. The lead section is also concise and it clearly outlines what is to be discussed throughout the article. There is also new information presented in the lead section that was not previously stated.

For the discography, it might be good to add the year to the album information? Also, did any of the albums win any particular awards (Grammy, American Music Award, etc)? Maybe you can add some information on the discography or within the body of the article?

Content is relevant and up-to-date. It also presents a topic that is addressing the equity gap. I do wonder if there is any information regarding his musical upbringing? Any information regarding training or early childhood musical experiences?

Tone is neutral and unbiased.

There are lot of great sources presented in the article. Also, many of the links do work on the article.

The article is well written. I also liked how you broke down the specific sections of the article. Great job!