User:Yk0302/User:Tofu98/Spanky Alford/Yk0302 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Tofu98

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tofu98/Spanky_AlfordLinks to an external site.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chalmers_Alford

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, tone is neutral, sources are reliable, and structures are well balanced.

Also, lead section was concise and easy to understand. Concerning the structure of article body, it would be good to have title on heading instead of "Article Body". Also it could describe Alford's career and life events in the chronological order with sub-headings or certain timelines such as the early life, mid, and the late.

I found a few paragraphs in the article body without citing. I am wondering where the contents came from.

I like the "playing style" section he added. I wish there was more detail about what "a mix of jazz inspired chord embellishments" means in his playing style.