User:Ylim4/Earlimart Pesticide Poisoning/Vale.ramir04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ylim4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pesticide incidents in the San Joaquin Valley


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The paragraph is relevant to the topic and is all up to date, and the links all go with what was being stated. The sources all seem to be reliable and go over all the information, and all the links are accessible. The structure is well put together and the tone is unbiased. Everything seems to be well organized and clear. Overall the paragraph improved the article with the information that being added and seems to be heading towards the right direction.