User:Yliu2350/Environmental psychology/Kayree644900 Peer Review

General info
Yi Liu- @Yliu2350
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Yliu2350/Environmental psychology/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Environmental psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm Kayla this is my peer review for you.

Lead- The Lead was updated with new content to reflect what would support the information already presented within the article. I think the amount of added content is a great way to advance the level of supported information for the article. My peer was able to find content for various sectors from research and theories. The content added was relevant to the topic. My peer added a research article about interdisciplinary research on  environmental changes and how this can change or cause problems within the human system. This helps showcase how environmental changes can affect other orgasms as well. Most of the articles ranged from 2016 - 2021 I would consider that to be up to date. The tone of the article draft seems to be neural which is good when presenting information so it will not be opinionated. The organization of the article is good with the flow of the existing article. Used a lot of good sources to add and enlighten on what is already available in the article.

Respond to Peer-Review
Kayla,

thank you for your feedback and suggestion I will make some update of my contribution.