User:Yliu2350/Environmental psychology/Maria.arriaga22 Peer Review

General info
I will be reviewing User:Yliu2350 article on Environmental Psychology.
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Yliu2350/Environmental psychology:Link to original article:Environmental psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
A good article to read about specifically because I had no prior knowledge of what Environmental Psychology is. Was lost at first because I couldn't understand what the field was about but later found the information on what the field is. One suggestion in terms of grammar would be to remove the common after the word sources in the references section. The whole sentence can be broken down into two. Change sentence to: '' Most claims have appropriate citations. Sources including academic publications and authoritative books appear to be reliable. '' Loved how the article draft was well organized including adding the contribution section in which I did not add on to my article draft. Overall, article draft was well written.

Respond to Peer-Review
Thank you for the feedback. I will make some changes in the sentence structure to ensure that the paragraph have a better flow as I am adding additional information to the topic.