User:Yliu2350/Environmental psychology/RiShebaB13 Peer Review

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Hi Yi. I enjoyed reading your article about environmental psychology. Your in depth contribution clearly explained what environmental psychology is. I was especially impressed with how you list different fields of psychology that environmental psychology is associated with. I would suggest, however, that you define each field that is listed. As I continued to read your contribution to the article, I was concerned about the parenthesis in the paragraphs that were not finished. I assume that you will complete this portion of the article when the time permits. Overall, I think you did a great job on this article.

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The resources that I found previously, I am using them to provide additional information to the topic. I think adding specific examples will help reader gain more understanding how does the idea fits in real life.

Thank you for the feedback.