User:Yllenerad/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title Raynaud syndrome
 * Article Evaluation This article has information which is relevant to the overall topic. It is written neutrally; however, there are areas in the article where citations are missing. Additionally, there are areas where there is more information needed on certain aspects of the topic. I believe it may tackle some equity gaps as people suffering with auto immune conditions/chronic illness aren't spoken about enough or researched enough. Many sources in this article are outdated; there should be newer articles incorporated to make sure the information presented is recent.
 * Sources https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29408338/
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/19547979/
 * Sources https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29408338/
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/19547979/

Option 2

 * Article title Lupus
 * Article Evaluation This article for the most part presents information that is relevant to the topic; the section outlining the history of Lupus may not be as relevant in this case. It might be better to talk about more current information. Additionally, several sources are out of date and it would help to incorporate newer sources with new and helpful knowledge about this illness. The overall tone is very neutral but there are areas which may need improvement.
 * Sources https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmed.2021.655100/full
 * https://www.niams.nih.gov/about/future-directions-lupus-research
 * https://www.everydayhealth.com/lupus/new-things-weve-learned-about-lupus-in-the-past-year/
 * https://www.niams.nih.gov/about/future-directions-lupus-research
 * https://www.everydayhealth.com/lupus/new-things-weve-learned-about-lupus-in-the-past-year/

Option 3

 * Article title Overlap syndrome
 * Article Evaluation This article presents neutral and relevant, but vague information about overlap syndrome. The overall information given sounds like a summary still, not a detailed informational article. Information can be pulled from more sources to make a more coherent and thorough article.
 * Sources https://www.lupusresearch.org/glossary_of_terms/overlap-syndrome/
 * https://www.cdriadvlkn.org/article.asp?issn=2542-551X;year=2019;volume=3;issue=1;spage=12;epage=17;aulast=Shah
 * Sources https://www.lupusresearch.org/glossary_of_terms/overlap-syndrome/
 * https://www.cdriadvlkn.org/article.asp?issn=2542-551X;year=2019;volume=3;issue=1;spage=12;epage=17;aulast=Shah

Option 4

 * Article title Sjögren syndrome
 * Article Evaluation The article presents relevant and useful information related to this topic. However, there are areas that need improvement as there is information given with no citation. Some references used are older so it may be improved by incorporating more recent information, especially if research has improved and changed.
 * Sources https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmed.2021.676885/full
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5471601/
 * Sources https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmed.2021.676885/full
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5471601/

Option 5

 * Article title Autoimmune disease in women
 * Article Evaluation While this article appears to have a neutral tone and have fairly relevant information, it may be biased since there is a severe lack of source variety. Since there are only two sources, we can't be sure that the information is very accurate. By incorporating more information, the article can be much more thorough. The article should clarify why there is a present gender bias when it comes to auto immune conditions.
 * Sources https://www.nature.com/articles/d41586-021-01836-9
 * https://tidsskriftet.no/en/2017/06/kronikk/why-are-autoimmune-diseases-more-prevalent-women
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7292717/
 * https://tidsskriftet.no/en/2017/06/kronikk/why-are-autoimmune-diseases-more-prevalent-women
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7292717/