User:YoBenAgain/Paula (Supercell Community Manager)/Blause Winterz Peer Review

General info
(provide username) YoBenAgain
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:YoBenAgain/Paula_%28Supercell_Community_Manager%29/Blause%20Winterz_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Is everything in the article related to the topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Yes, everything in the article is relevant and there is nothing that distracted me as a reader. The article has a lot of good information especially about her upbringing.

Is the article neutral? Yes, this article is neutral. The article is neutral because it doesn't gloat about Paula's career success too much. It is unbiased.

Are there any viewpoints that are over represented or under represented? Yes, a lot is said about Paula's life and how she became successful but not enough is said about how she got her fame. The article mentions she got popular on Twitch and Instagram but I want to know why and how. What stood her apart from everyone else? That's what I want to know.

Are the citations correct? Do the links work? I do not see any citations on the article so that needs to be included.

No, none of the points are supported by evidence because there are no sources.

I don't know if any of this information is out of date because there are no sources so I cannot see how out of date or hwo reliable these sources are.