User:Yoshi-dawg/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Pinky Swear
 * Article Evaluation

- Lead Section


 * Short Paragraph. Very consise and not very much information.

-Content


 * Very limited content
 * They only really talk about how people pinky swear in other countries and what they call it.
 * Doesn't talk about its origins at all

- Tone and Balance


 * The article is neutral.

-Organization and writing quality


 * There is only two sections including the intro.
 * Needs more content and more specific sections.

-Sourcing


 * The sources don't seem too reliable and out of date

- Images and Media


 * Only one photo with simple caption

-Overall Impressions


 * This article is okay. It lacks a lot of information and lack of labeled sections.
 * Needs more organization.
 * I could add a lot more information from a variety of sources.

-Talk Section


 * There is no activity on the talk page


 * Sources
 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * China Fashion Week


 * Article Evaluation
 * -Lead Section
 * Short paragraph with a pretty general information
 * -Content
 * 3 short sections
 * Talks about themes, sponsors, and awards exclusively
 * - Tone and Balance
 * No bias.
 * -Organization and writing quality
 * No particular order of sections.
 * Poor writing quality
 * -Sourcing
 * Most of the sources seem to be random news articles so not very reliable
 * -Images and Media
 * Only one opicture which is a graphic with the Mercedes Benz Logo and below says "China Fashion Week"
 * Overall Impressions
 * Pretty dissapointed in the amount of content given such an exciting topic
 * There could be a lot more information and photos about the shows from each year it has been around
 * Talk Section
 * There is not very much activity on the Talk Page
 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Daves Killer Bread


 * Article Evaluation - Lead Section
 * Substantial paragraph with good general information -Content
 * Very limited content
 * there is only a lead section - Tone and Balance
 * The article is neutral. -Organization and writing quality
 * There is only one sections including the intro.
 * Needs more content and more specific sections.
 * needs more information about company's image -Sourcing
 * The sources seem reputable - Images and Media
 * Only two photos with simple caption -Overall Impressions
 * This article is decent but lacks a lot of information  -Talk Section
 * There is no activity on the talk page
 * Sources
 * Sources
 * Sources