User:YossTur/Nashville Student Movement/Jennyat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(YossTur)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:YossTur/Nashville_Student_Movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nashville Student Movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading through the article, YossTur lead does reflect updated content being added. Their lead paragraph presents a comprehensive and detailed description and adds value to the article. I believe the tone is neutral. There is only one reference. All content is well written and organized. The content being added has impact, since there isn't much written in the article.