User:YossTur/Nashville Student Movement/Mleo4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

YossTur's article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Nashville student movements


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
unfortunately i cannot tell what writing comes from Kevin, as the sandbox redirects to the official article, however that being said i believe i can tell, as the "Legacy" section is very fleshed out. the writing present perfectly lays out the scene of nashville during a time of heavy racial discrimination and how that effected students learning there, as well as how from this, sit-ins and non-violent protest were used during the student movements, however i notice that a quote is uncited, but other than that i believe this is a strong article revision which helps to make what was most likely a very "dead end" article, into one with much more credence and knowledge.