User:Young2131

About me
Hello, my name is Young2131. My nickname is Young. I am 21 years old, and from Korea. My hobbies are bowling, playing computer games, and working with machines. My first career goal was to be a veterinarian, because I have been with animals since I was young and my heart aches when I see sick animals. But now I have changed my goal. I intend to become an aviation mechanic. I like working with machines and traveling. Because I was interested in airplanes, my parents suggested that I become an aviation mechanic. I've given up a lot to become an aviation mechanic, but after I achieve this goal, I'll try all of those things again.

My Wikipedia Interests
My interest in Wikipedia is computer https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Computer. Since I was a child, I have been interested in everything about computers. I have learned how to make a computer program as well as memorizing most of the computer parts. However, Korea, on average, did not go to a good university if all the attention was not focused on studying from 17 to 19. So, I couldn't study computer because I was studying Korean, math, science, and English. Recently, after studying for this quarter class, I often look for computers. So, I was amazed that this Wikipedia information was really good and there was a lot of different information.

Article evaluation
I started smoking 6 years ago. What I have done so far are paper cigarettes and electronic cigarettes. I visited Wikipedia Juul page to find out about the cigarette I'm smoking now, and I visited the Juul article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: incorrect information, lack of information, and lack of quotation

Incorrect information
Only one page is showing Juul's information, but some are incorrect. On this page, Juul's taste is described as only tobacco, mint, and menthol flavors remain and the rest disappear. However, as a result of my research, there is a wrong information because various flavors still exist and the taste I recently bought is fruit flavor.

Lack of information
The page lacks some information. Generally, these products have advantages and disadvantages. These articles have only a few shortcomings and some expressions are not good. The article contrasts with many other cigarettes here and can express many advantages and disadvantages.

Lack of quotation
There are many quotes in this article. I can see a lot of quotes from below, but some of the articles are not quoted, so I don't know why there's a problem. If you quote many of these Wikipedia articles, they can be trusted even more.

summary
Overall, I rated this page as normal. Some of the information provided is consistent with what I researched: design, investors, and founders. However, some do not match: nicotine content and international things. I think it would be better to have more reliable information and more quotes on these pages.