User:Youssef.ramy/Egypt's Islamic Cultural Center/Yacineghedas Peer Review

The Wikipedia article on the Grand Mosque within Egypt's Islamic Cultural Centre is comprehensive but could benefit from several refinements to align more closely with Wikipedia's standards. Firstly, while the article is well-cited using sources like Egypt Independent, The Guardian, and BBC, there is a need for consistency in citation formatting to enhance readability and uniformity. The architectural descriptions, while detailed, sometimes appear promotional with phrases like "signifying purity and the advancement of spirituality." To maintain neutrality, such phrases should be clearly attributed to designers or noted sources, rather than presented as factual statements.

Moreover, the article should include discussions on any criticisms or controversies related to the mosque's construction, such as the socio-economic concerns highlighted by the BBC, to provide a balanced perspective. Comparative analysis with other major mosques globally could also be added to contextualize its architectural significance.

Lastly, incorporating multimedia elements like images or architectural plans of the mosque would visually enrich the content, provided these are properly licensed and captioned in line with Wikipedia's guidelines. Addressing these points would improve the article's neutrality, verifiability, and comprehensiveness, making it a better fit for Wikipedia's global audience.

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