User:Yrodriguez7/Asexuality/CalebTerronez Peer Review

Caleb Terronez's peer view

I like how you described Asexuality and the research of how it affects people. I would add more on the causes of asexuality and the research behind it. I would also look to work how interconnected asexuality and celibacy are, your section left me wanted to read more on this. I felt you kind of just described each term but now look to what is the same and how they are different. For the section on intersections with race and disability, are you trying to say Asexuality is a disability or people with a disability are assumed to be asexuality? I would work on making this more clear and adding more what these stereotypes that Asexual people deal with.

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