User:Ysof011/Black Joy Museum/Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ysof011


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ysof011/Black_Joy_Museum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi all--this is a great start. You will want to expand the section on exhibits and also link to any pages within wiki that are relevant there. If there has been any criticism you will want to include that as well. Making sure you stay up to date on any new articles about the museum will be key. Also link to the page on virtual museums on wiki. You might want to explain a bit about the platform and how a user accesses the exhibits. Other than that just keep plugging along!