User:Ysof011/Black Joy Museum/RAlexis13 Peer Review

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Black Joy Museum


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The page was quite insightful and I really appreciated the contextual information about the creator in addition to the museum because it helps with my framing of the article when reading. I also liked the overall organization of the page into the headings “Background” and “Exhibits and Artwork”, it was visually pleasing and helped with easy navigation of the page.

For improvement I would suggest creating subsections for the biographical information about the creator (i.e. education, youth, inspirations, covid-19, etc.) so that the information presented isn’t squeezed into a paragraph style. If the organization is slightly improved, it would assist viewers with following along with all the content that you all effortlessly researched and included!