User:Yuanting Wang 03/Junk food/Ywan1031 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Yuanting Wang 03


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuanting%20Wang%2003/Junk_food?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the lead part, the author did not summarize the main contents of this article besides listing two names. In the article body part, the author only mentioned the idea "the effects of eating junk food". No details about the idea were presented here. In the references part, a related source was listed. The source is relatively reliable as it comes from "Journal of Neurophysiology".