User:Yumhotpot/User:Galimeo/sandbox/Yumhotpot Peer Review

The content created provides a neutral and informational point of view on the trajectory of a parcel of fluid that's displaced in a stratified fluid. It would greatly improve the quality of an article focusing on the Brunt-Väisälä frequency or displaced fluids. If it were it's own article, this content could be improved by providing context or background information on what the Brunt-Väisälä frequency means, or what are the dimensions of the displacement are. For instance, it is unclear in which direction the parcel of fluid is moving away from the orinal position.

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