User:Yungam99/Lottery (probability)/Jx2022 Peer Review

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Yungam99


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 * Lottery (probability)
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(Sorry I originally posted this on the Talk page)

1.     Lead section

This wiki page starts with introductory sentences that explain the definition of a lottery probability. It also mentioned the involvement of lottery in different areas, and concisely summarizes the main idea of the article. Here the explanation was only provided using in the expected utility theory and economics. I feel an elaboration on this section by having some examples from each area can be helpful.

2.     Article

The content of this paper contains an example using the expected utility theory in lottery, which provides information about the real-world involvement of these principles. Since the introduction mentioned about lottery in both expected utility theory and economics, an additional example relating to lottery in economics could be useful to understand the idea.

3.     References

This article used majorly book references to provide a general overview of the main idea about lottery. Since this method can be used in various practices, I feel bringing up information from other relevant articles in addition to the current references would be helpful to determine real-life applications of this study.