User:Yungkorine2009/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Music
 * Harsh noise wall


 * Article Evaluation
 * Article briefly summarizes the said genre
 * Relevant to topic? somewhat 
 * Is the article written neutrally? yes 
 * Would have liked more history of the Genre itself within the article
 * The article seems to be ripped from a website called called "Profilpelajar.com" (Indonesian website)
 * There are three references, two of which are not clickable
 * Clickable reference provided (https://thequietus.com/articles/15315-live-report-hnw-fest-iii)
 * I will find more references
 * I will also build on the history of the genre utilizing my sources/references I have found



Option 2

 * Article title: Film Maker
 * Fredi M. Murer
 * Article Evaluation
 * Article is lacking majority of information
 * I will add more references
 * Relevant to topic? yes
 * No information from reference given
 * Reference link no longer exists
 * Is the article written from a neutral standpoint? yes
 * Overall article needs lots of work
 * I will also add film makers filmography and awards given to me via film makers personal website
 * https://fredi-murer.ch/ueber-mich

Option 3

 * Article title: Location
 * Créhen


 * Article Evaluation
 * Article is lacking majority of information needed
 * No historical background other than population
 * The article does not display any bias
 * I would flesh out a couple paragraphs on the history of the location
 * Two out of the three references given valid
 * I will gather references from neutral standpoint - https://www.cirkwi.com/en/point-interet/182023-the-guildo-castle
 * Communes within said location are already added to the article