User:Yungkorine2009/Harsh noise wall/Ogbobbyjohnson1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yungkorine2009


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yungkorine2009/Harsh_noise_wall?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I find that the content presented is clear and easy to read. It gives a through neutral background to the history of White Noise Music. The sources given do seem to work as well, it meets the Notability Requirements. Overall it is a good edit with no grammatical errors.