User:Yungkorine2009/Harsh noise wall/Omgmylife Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Yungkorine2009
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yungkorine2009/Harsh noise wall
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the second paragraph, which provides a definition/description of Harsh noise wall, should be combined with the first paragraph. In addition, the sources are incorrectly cited. Reference failed to provide each direct website for all of your resources, and the source omitted some key information such as author.