User:Yuntian Gan/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Laetitia Ky


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is writing neutrally and relevantly about Laetitia Ky the artist, with citations from relatively reliable online news articles or official sites. These citations justifies her notability and provides significant events about her.
 * The problem of this page include:
 * The formatting of this page is confusing, like the info box compile all information, including the art genra she works on into one box.
 * The picture in info box is one of her artwork that works on her hair, which is not the most appropriate. Rather, it can be used in the part that introduce how she become awared and illuminate what kind of art is she working on.
 * Some of the link to source page is outdated but can be fixed.
 * The structuring of body (naming of subtitles, arrangement of information) is not ideal
 * May need some recent updates on information.


 * Sources
 * Africa 35.35. “THE TOP 35 YOUNG PEOPLE IN THE FRANCOPHONE ZONE (AFRICA AND BEYOND) IN 2018.” Africa 35.35 | The African Youth of the Year Awards | Les Awards De La Jeune Personnalité Africaine De L'Année, 24 Feb. 2020, africa3535.com/africa-3535-2018.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Joseph Robert Love


 * Article Evaluation
 * The body provide some commentary descriptions / opinions
 * There is only one single source in this page, and the link is outdated.
 * The subtitles and sections under subtitles compile information together instead of separating sections properly (e.g. Early life, education and fraternal affiliations).


 * Sources
 * Lumsden, Joy. "JOSEPH ROBERT LOVE, 1839-1914: WEST INDIAN EXTRAORDINARY." Afro - Americans in New York Life and History (1977-1989), vol. 7, no. 1, 1983, pp. 25. ProQuest, http://resources.library.brandeis.edu/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.resources.library.brandeis.edu/docview/219957051?accountid=9703.
 * The National Library of Jamaica. “Robert Love (1839-1914).” Robert Love (1839-1914) | The National Library of Jamaica, nlj.gov.jm/project/robert-love-1839-1914/.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Razan Naiem Almoghrabi


 * Article Evaluation
 * No info box
 * The information about her activity / career / publications can be better listed instead of mixing together.


 * Sources
 * “Razan - a Dream Blowing in the Wind?” Peace Insight, 21 Jan. 2015, www.peaceinsight.org/blog/2015/01/razan-dream-blowing-wind/.

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