User:Yunzhe Xu/Zhang Yimou/Danauca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yunzhe Xu Zhang Yimon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yunzhe%20Xu/Zhang_Yimou?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The amount of sources and the content give is very impressive. It looks organized and has a very good tone. The lead seems a bit short and the time line created for his career looks off and should be more uniform instead of spread out. There are no sources for what happened at the Olympics which there probably should be. The tables look good and are very uniform. Other info could be added to them like the amount of time the film is, studio the films were located. Early life and education has nothing about his early life and only speaks on his education so early life doesn't seem to be needed in the header.