User:Yunzhe Xu/Zhang Yimou/Kristin Liu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuzhe Xu/Zhang Yimou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yunzhe%20Xu/Zhang_Yimou?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After I looked at the author's article, I think every part of the article is comprehensive.The article has a reasonable sequential order and the distribution is organized. The works and careers mentioned in the article are up-to-date. I think what the author has added is very detailed, I checked the relevant citations and they are all relevant to the topic also the source support the claims in the article.The article is neutral. The articles are easy to read, have a clear structure and balanced coverage. After reading the article, I think the author has a very detailed introduce of director Zhang Yimou and I think something could be added because Zhang Yimou has many other identities besides director and the films he made have influenced society and the development of cinema.